And a bit more extreme:
Leaning toward the 2nd one. More comic looking... (I did use the "Comic" filter...)
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Fri Nov 18, 2016 3:43 pm
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The only reason I switched the direction of the instruments was actually because the new blimp (which is a model of the Hindenburg) was facing that way and I had put lettering on it so it looked wrong if I flipped it horizontally.) The main purpose of the re-do was to tone down the flames, but I also wanted a better looking blimp. And I don't mind that the instruments are now in the form of the Japanese character for "people", but I doubt that most people would notice that...
So, any opinions on which is better?
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Wed Nov 16, 2016 7:28 pm
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What do you think? (I may flip the image so the cello is on the left though... That would make the shape of the Japanese symbol for "people", but the blimp should be hitting from the left as well and that wouldn't really fit in the space well... hmmm... Nope, I think i like it like this.)
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Wed Nov 16, 2016 9:11 am
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Still in the market for early readers!
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:31 am
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Anyway, send me a private message if you would like to give me a hand!
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Tue Oct 04, 2016 9:37 am
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So, the upshot is, if I've sent you a copy, ignore what I've sent...
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Fri Sep 09, 2016 8:41 am
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So, anyway, if any of you would like to help me out by being an "Early Reader", I would really appreciate it. I would rather not post a general link, though, since I'd like to keep track of who has what version of the document, etc...
The way I have it set up is in a Word .docx file with "Track Changes" turned on so you can just make edits and comments in the document and send it back, then I can go through it and deal with what you have suggested as I see fit. (The old "any errors remaining are my own" bit. If I choose to ignore your grammatical or thematic advice, the weight is on my head.) I've already sent the text off to Stan, my "First Reader" I guess. I am a bit concerned about chapter 5... it may be a bit edgy.
If you haven't read the first book and would like to do this for me, there are two options. The first option is to read the first book first. It is done! I can send it to you in PDF, Word Doc, Epub, Mobi, or AZW3 format (if i can get the last two to work right. I know the EPub is working).
The second option is to read the introduction to the second book, which includes a summary of what happened in the first book, but probably won't really give you the full picture.
Anyway, either post a message here or send me a PM if you are interested in helping and I'll send you the link by PM or email if you prefer. (Though you may have to give me your email address.)
Statistics: Posted by Zen — Sun Sep 04, 2016 3:22 pm
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